Please show the manga agency LessonHP(sorry,in japanese)
http://www.yamada-kikaku.com/lesson.html
「Who」
「When」
「Where」
「What」
「How」
「Why」
These are factors which need to tell people a events(stories).
If you lack these factors,readers can't understand events correctly.
By contraries,because of your hiding one from 5W1H intentionally,the story may be
attractive.
ex)Mystery lack 「Who」 from 5W1H.
So it's a mystery.
○Opening
It's the start as a story.
You don't have to advance events alon with time axis.
This is an important point to be attractive for readers and to let them go on reading.
Let's think the way to give impacts and to let them have interests.
○Ending
It's a clothing of a story.
Give an ending for your story if you describe s contribution.
Don't finish by the word "To be continued".
The readers' feelings change by the ending.
And there is a way to fling a problem to readers without solving evreything.
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Produced by-Zero-dimension, Inc. and yamada-kikaku
English translation by Ri Tokuyou and Nakajima Yoshiya
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